oh lovely

*tears in my eyes and nearly crying at the end*

I liked it.

Don't we all wish it happened this way? No matter whether Harry caught on eventually or no, it still would have been super sweet.

You're so great. Let me tell you why real quick. You have some awesome grammar skills, a way with words and your details are vivid. What more can I ask for? :)

I wish this was the version in the book. You wrote this very well. Thank you.

A story with true emotion. Thank you.

~ Miss Eliza Azraelian

Wow, that was very powerful! I think this version would have been more appropriate in the book, because even though Snape gave Harry the memories to find out the truth, I think they still needed that last closing moment together, just the two of them. Made me sniffle a bit. Awesome job!
-Julz

/petition/half-blood-prince/

Beautiful one shot.

Very well-written scene, thank you for it. :) *sniff*

Okay, that was hard as hell to read because now I feel like crying. I don't know how you managed to pack so many emotions into the words you used so sparingly, but I feel like I need to curl up with a cushion now. Wow. Brilliant job.

Useless Harry, don't know a unseful spell.

THis is so sad but I still love it lol

:( So sad. Honorable, but such a waste! Well-written.

omg i cried so much! it was fantastic! i have no words that was the sweetest piece of torture i ever read! i dont know how to say it! it was tragically sad! i loved it! did severus want to look in Harry's eyes to see the Lily everyone sa in them? i think thinkisng about Sev's story in DH! i loved it! thank you for this piece=) *applauds*

Julianne