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Dyrne-Faemne
2008-03-26
ch 4,
abuseinteresting story. Poor Impala, did the demon send the tornado to kill them off? Guinea pigs attacking, poor Dean!! now smelly Dean. Like the story...more.
supernaturalsammy67
2008-03-25
ch 4,
abusehahhahahahahahaha
lol hun

i coulodnt stop laughing]

awesome with the guinea pigs hahhaha

great!
supernaturalsammy67
2008-03-10
ch 3,
abuseAW wow hun another fantastic chapter!
who
lol

i liked this bit-“Dean, calm down she can be fixed, again.” Dean walked over to the car and started to look her over. He patted her gently, and tried to give her a hug, as a tear slipped down his cheek and hit the cars surface.

“What did that nasty old tornado do to you.” He whispered as he started to pull on the branch that was sticking out of the side of the car, wiggling it at the same time then Sam started to walk over to help and was almost there in front of it. Dean gave it a bigger tug and it came flying out and hit Sam in the groin.
lol that made me laugh hahha

great, thanks hun x
supernaturalsammy67
2008-03-04
ch 2,
abuseOMG!
you got dean the perfect big brother!
wow, what a great read hun hehe x
lol
x

WOW!!
omg i loved this bit-#Dean started to move the rubble off his brother and grabbed his left arm and pulled.

“Ow, Dean, stop.” Then Dean leaned over his brother and rolled him over and gave him a look over.

“Where you hurt, Sam?”

just omg...hurt sam rules!
owie LOL haha, nice one hun x

omg the impala is wrecked, nice detail by the way xx
!! WOW what a great chapterI LOVE IT HUN X
supernaturalsammy67
2008-03-04
ch 1,
abuseOMG
HUN!
you arr so super talented omG!
this fic is awesome, im gonna go read more-freakin genious hun i LOVED IT!!
haha nice evil cliffie too lolx
omg i died at this bit it was god-
“GOD DAMN IT! I’m taring up my damn car.” He swerved back on the rode and gained control . Then looked over at Sam and saw he was holding the right side of his head. “Hey Sammy, you alright?”

Sam sat up and moved his hand and it had a little blood on it. “Yep I think so, you?”

haha
omg hun you have really suprised me, you said you werent that good
your AMAZIN!

lol, im watching twister on tv too hahaha lol
weird coincidence eh x
mariethorne
2008-03-04
ch 2,
abuseOhmygosh poor Deans lost the love of his life:) Great so far please update soon.
friendly
2008-03-02
ch 1,
abuseah man dean is going to be **.. good start.. can't wait for more
DancerInTheDark101
2008-03-02
ch 1,
abuseHay this sounds really interesting! Can't wait to see what Dean's reaction to his smashed up baby is! Keep up the good work!

-Dancer-
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