 R2-D2106 2009-12-05 . chapter 33Is Keri ever going to get off this planet? I really fear this is too much like "Survivor" for Imperial-Rebellion relations to improve. Eep. I just hope no one finds a deactivated RE, and dead Rebel and Imp with blaster wounds on both...
Please tell me everything's getting better.
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 Nelarun 2009-09-23 . chapter 33Nice. brilliant last three chapters!
Nela |
 TheMacUnleashed 2009-09-19 . chapter 33Hooray for productive days, and also updates! Nice chapter, it had a lighter tone to it. I look forwards to the next update! |
 TheMacUnleashed 2009-08-30 . chapter 32"Whoopee. And here was me thinking that Rebel-Imperial relations were getting better." Always the optimist, Keri. Great chapter! I can't wait to learn what happens next. |
 RowenaR 2009-08-30 . chapter 32Meh, someone needs to make Rael AND Keri see they are destined for each other ;) |
 TheMacUnleashed 2009-08-19 . chapter 31Good job! I love the interaction between Keri and Rael. This chapter had a much more relaxed, humourous feel to it, for which I'm very glad- it seems like less and less humour is being written nowadays. Anyhow, I look forwards to your next update! |
 RowenaR 2009-08-06 . chapter 30Ah, finally a new chapter! Though... I still want to lock up Keri and Rael into a room and only let them out after they have cleared up all their differences and have learned to get along with each other :P |
 Nin'nae 2009-08-06 . chapter 30 Loved this chapter!
The thought of the Fatlings trying to eat Aree... Someone should make that into a drawing or picture... :) |
 TheMacUnleashed 2009-08-05 . chapter 30Fantastic continuation! Kerigan definitely deserved to win Best Female OC -she's such a likable character. Sarcastic, resourceful, a darned good writer -the only ones possibly better in this story are the Fatlings. Anyhow, great chapter! |
 Nelarun 2009-06-26 . chapter 29Brilliant! Amazing! I love it! I can't wait to read more. This is so hilarious!
Nela |
 RowenaR 2009-06-16 . chapter 29Could they please end up somewhere locked up together so they can work out there issues? ;) |
 Nin'nae 2009-06-16 . chapter 29 Nice one! Great action, a new development in the relationship of Keri and Rael and a load of cute Fatlings. I wonder what names they'll end up with and if Rael gets to have a say in this.
Fatty's reactions seem pretty realistic, the growling and defending her young thing I mean.
Can't wait for more. :) |
 TheMacUnleashed 2009-06-15 . chapter 29Tomorrow should be interesting, indeed! Good chapter; nice job combining the action and humor. |
 TheMacUnleashed 2009-06-03 . chapter 28Good job! I have to admit, I'm finding myself liking Imp Boy. |
 RowenaR 2009-06-03 . chapter 28Meh, I want to hit Kerigan over the head now. I never thought I'd feel sorry for an Imperial but now I do. Poor, poor Rael. But very good writing on your part ;) |