please miss can we have some more?

nice.lols!

i really like how you organize your story from everyone's points of view. mostly edwin, liz, case, and derek, but i like how there's random ones like Lassiter and stuff. gr8 job!

isn't saying 'ungrammaticle' being ungrammaticle?

you are DEFINETELY my favorite author on this site! gr8 job!

im sure u hear this a lot, but this story is awesome!

love the story!

I would be so proud of my sister if she did that.

This was such a well-written Lizwin story. You handled the subject matter and it's repercussions really well without going overboard on the drama but keeping it appropriate. And Ed and Liz are the sweetest kids ever. It's so touching to read how much they care about each and how what each one does effects the other. I also liked how you included the whole family and the close friends in the coping part. Dasey on the side was sweet too as well as the tiny hint of Shemily. I pretty much loved everything about it and if this fic is not over could I please please implore you to update. Anyhow brilliant job so far. :)

do you now or have you ever gone to branksome hall? i'm just wondering because weinstock is kinda an original name and shes lik famous at my school

Oh man! I THINK i'm glad he took the plea... but I'm really glad his judge isn't easy! I'm glad Lizzie doesn't have to relive it but if she had he would have gone away for longer and I think she could have handled it. I still think I'm glad he took the plea though!
Love it!
~Crystal

Great chapter. I've been following this story and I love the way you're writing the characters. I feel like we're really seeing inside their heads. I also like the way you're writing these characters seriously. You've got a few lighthearted moments but you're treating their angst and the way they cope with things or not cope with what looks like real care and effort on your part. You make them seem like real people.

I know it's not a show for adults. There's nothing wrong with the cheesy silliness of the show sometimes, but at other times I think the problems of the characters are treated way too lightly or unrealistically. I hope I'm being clear and you realize what I'm trying to say. Basically I love your story and I'm a big fan of the way you write Lizzie/Edwin and Derek/Casey.

Five years is better than nothing.

Update soon, please! =]

Love Edwin in this chapter. Jamie was good too, “Cheese and crackers"lol.

I love how Edwin's trying to be the anti-Derek... for some reason, that amused me. And I loved how everyone was trying to distract Lizzie.

Nice "Lord of the Flies" allusion. ;P

Overall, another wonderful chapter. Please update soon!

Lizwin is so Cute and the touch of Dasey was nice!
I love this part! I can so relate... well from a girls POV anyway,lol. The "Broke their Hearts" line is adorably/sadly honest!
“Feels like it,” she said. “Stop making me feel old, boy.” She was maybe twenty-seven or twenty-eight. He had the biggest crush on her when he was little, as had Derek, but then she had to go and get married a couple of years back. Broke their hearts.
~Crystal