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Pikapi 4/8/12 . chapter 6
Sometimes, just sometimes, you'll strike it rich in writing. Find a gem. Some gems are worth more than others-silver, which isn't really a gem at all, but still somewhat valuable, to ultra-rare, glittering, and striking diamonds. Something that can't be topped.

Sometimes, just sometimes, you'll be amazed by how well one can write.

Sometimes, just sometimes, you'll find a story where you don't care how long the update wait is-just that it does, in the end.

This story...

It's one of them.

Absolutely amazing writing.

It's an amazing AU for Pokemon; mystery and wholesome characters mixed together with an eye-catching plot from the very first chapter.

I though I had seen good writing.

I was wrong.

You take the cake-the entire thing. Plus another one.

Does it seem as if I'm just spouting out insincere praise?

Because I'm not trying to.

I just cannot find anything-anything at all-that I dislike about this story.

Usually I prefer English names for the characters, just for familiarity and convience, but your choice to use the Japanese names was a good one. It makes the story seem much more regal, realistic. Unique.

Thank you so much for writing this story. It is amazing.

Have you tried publishing any original stories? Whoever would reject writing of this caliber(correct usage?) is an idiot.

I am extremely excited for the next update and can't wait to see this story unfold. :)

This review is rather jumpy, isn't it. :/ *shrug*

P.S Love the title-how you made a reference to Satoshi's Eng. name was a nice touch.

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SweetAngel92 3/20/11 . chapter 6
This story is amazing please Haruka don't died Kikuko is so goning to died

But great story(_)
Livin'OnAPrayer 3/20/11 . chapter 6
This is such a great story! It would be such a shame if you didn't continue it! Please update as soon as you can.
AshandMistyLove 2/22/11 . chapter 1
I LOVE this story! you HAVE tro update soon! it's one of the bets I have ever read!

SERIOUSLY!

AAML:)

p.s i like the fact you are using the jap names!
YumeTakato 2/11/11 . chapter 6
I enjoyed the chapter. X3 Ah, the insanity of it all. See you next time!
AshandMistyLove 2/11/11 . chapter 6
this IS supposed to be pokeshipping right?

When will misty appear? Update soon! An awesome plot, and cool!

AAML:)
TheFanatics 2/11/11 . chapter 6
Welcome Back!

Excellent Chapter by the way!
lord Martiya 2/11/11 . chapter 6
A prince of Tokiwa... Not THE Prince... Who will die? Hiroshi? Satoshi? We'll see...
Alexandria Paige 1/25/11 . chapter 5
I've read both your Poke'mon stories and I can't decide which one I want updated more. I watch lots of subbed anime (Dubbed anime is EVIL and must be DESTROYED!) but I didn't know Poke'mon was originally in anything other than English. Looking back it should have been obvious. Keep using the REAL names, please. You rock.
Starr18 1/21/11 . chapter 5
Please keep on going with your stories. I can't wait to see what happens now. With Satoshi and his Bulvasaur. And is Satoshi going to be a Pikachu egg?
MissMeha611 12/26/10 . chapter 5
Wow, this is so different than what I usually like to read, but i love this story! It's very well written! Please update soon because I can't wait to read more! :D
Masshiroi Hasu 9/23/10 . chapter 5
pleaseeeee update soon this is one of the best stories ive ever read so pleaseeee update
Lightning Rain 9/9/10 . chapter 5
Awesome story so far! Looking forward to more!
Darkhero21 8/29/10 . chapter 5
AHA! i knew i would find this story on Fanfiction!...Sorry its just, i read and look at your stuff on deviantart and just today thought to check here. well anyway great chapter and hoping for the next one soon
TheFanatics 6/12/10 . chapter 5
great chapter keep them coming!
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