ah. the story was so nice :3

~Mo-ChAn♥

Cool story!^^ I can just see them talking haha :P

Absolutely hilarious! LOVE it!

XD great one^^ really^^ I rarely see fics with Roy having problems to tell riza that he loves her^^

oh that's just so sweet...n funny!

this is so funny! I was laughing all the way!!
and the last part if so cute!

Hahaha! This is rather amusing and I think you did a great job... Roy sucks at poetry...

"flames are red, rain is blue, I'm the flame alchemist who really loves you!" That was rich! I loved it!

You wrote a great piece of art!

I loved the ending. ^_^

Sg

“I love your hair, your lips, your eyes. But most of all, I love your thighs."

I must let you know that you nearly killed me. Heh, I was eating rice (Yummy) when I read that part and choked XD It was well worth the near death experience though ^.^

I liked it; it was cute! Poor Roy though! Hayate must have bitten him good!

That was so funny! Roy's bad poetry made me laugh so much. The ending was sweet too.

Aie! Love conquors all!

short and simple
not too cheesy and romantic
love it! (",x)

Aw, so cute~

Hahahahahahahahahaha... XD I was laughing till the end of the story. Excellent. The last poet is flawless and yet very very sweet. Well done!