 ece23 2009-05-17 . chapter 1Hey,
This is such an amazing story, really original, and sweet! It's such a cool idea that they have such a strong connection, and the guys stay in character all the way through. Definitely going on my favourites list! |
 PutMoneyInThyPurse 2008-04-06 . chapter 1Oh, I love this! It's so difficult to show the love without slipping into sentimentality, but you managed to walk the fine line throughout. the incredulity of the doctors, Dobey, all concerned made it easier to slip into believing. I especially liked the little glimpse of Dobery at the end:
“I seem to spend all my time waiting. Waiting for results from stakeouts, waiting to see cases solved and criminals behind bars...” He trailed off briefly, and then continued in a softer tone. “Waiting to hear from the officers that I've sent into danger, only to find out that someone was shot or injured... waiting to see if they're gonna be okay...” His voice dropped even lower, and he seemed to have forgotten that Huggy was there. “Waiting for the doctors to tell me that my partner's dead...”
Aw. I love the way his voice gets lower (kudos for the elegant variation in using 'softer' in the first transition and 'lower' in the second) and the last "Waiting for the doctors to tell me that my partner's dead..." is heartbreaking. really lovely. thank you so much for this. |