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Reviews for: Past Those Green Eyes
KnucklesRedFury207.2
2008-05-04 . chapter 1
i like this story! hope you make more!!
Evil Genius the Angel
2008-03-18 . chapter 1
Great job! I'm new, too, and I've been wondering what was running through Don Lino's Head.

Lenny: Yeah! Pop's glad that his story finally got out. Right, Pop?

Don Lino: Yeah. Sure, kid.

Lenny: Pop's kinda stressed out since I'm taking over da business in November.

Don Lino: I AM NOT STRESSED OUT! (leaves)

OK. Anyways, keep on writing stories! UR one of my favorite authors! Peace out!
The Geeky Brunette
2008-03-13 . chapter 1
I don't think you're stealing my idea at all, and in fact I'm rather flattered. :) Thanks, and this was really well written!
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