Beautiful :) not horrible at all!
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Wow...that was great! I remember skimming over this book, and I know it's very popular. I read it later...pretty good. Vampires ftw.

I think in general it was a good poem. It was raw in emotion and it really portrayed what a lot of people go through, so I give it a thumbs up. But for Bella I find it too harsh. She was more catatonic with her anger, less active about it. It laid dormant in here while she did all those crazy stunts she did. Again I think that it was a great general poem but not so IC with Bella.

Love,
RIn

cool. i REALLY REALLY REALLY like the ending. awesome. i so didn't see that coming. keep up the good work and the awesome comebacks or insults, or whatever's. awesome!! 10/10