wow 0o0

Pretty, angsty, fluffy, and cute. I've seen some beautiful illistrations for the story of the Little Match Girl and you've painted a beautiful mental image for me of Jou in those pictures, lighter and all. Thank you for a very enjoyable story.

I loved this and I think it would be nice if it also had a Seto's side of the story., But that's just my yaoi fan opinion.

Oh man I can't stop crying that was so sad. I saw the animated version of "The Little Match Girl" when I was in college last year and it was soo heartrendering. I am so glad you wrote this fic. T_T

...oh my damn...I love you for writing this, ever since I was little the little match girl had always been my favorite story!! And now it's even better that you added my favorite pairing into it...I'm really touched by it, thank you for writing this!! :)

... ...Damn, this is sad. *is rendered speechless for a moment, thinking it over*
I'm glad that they got together (sort of) in the end... I say that Joey lives! Aw, I feel so sorry for him... *sniff*

Brilliantly done, really. *thumbs-up*

God, **, I can't stop crying...

aw! it's so touchy and make me want to cry... wa!(go and grab some tissue)

NO! He survived! He will not die, I refuse to believe he died. *cries*

I think I'll interpret that he survived. So sad, though, also kudos for the interesting adaptation of the classic puppyshipping plot.

That was so sad! It even got me to cry a little at the end.

Its an interesting idea to use the plot from some other story. I find it helps us to learn, too.

I also like the pace the fic goes and the rhythm(is that wat its called?). :D
(listenin to moral no soushiki on loop somehow also makes this even more sad.heh..)

COOL sad story!

it made me teared!

so, are you gonna start a new story or some sequel thingy to Whispers in the Dark?

UPDATEX SOON~! :D :D :D