This story is fantastic. Im a little devastated you haven't updated in so long. I really hope you haven't given up on this story.

Loved reading this story! wish it had been completed though...

I just spent six hours straight reading this story and then I saw the last time it was updated. It's one of my favourite Jericho stories on here. I hope this review might spark you to right more chapters so it's at least completed.

I so love this story so far!

It seems to be a long time since you updated, so my hopes are sinking... but... maybe... pretty pretty please?

:)

I am a little late to the Jericho party. but I just marathon read all 24 chapters and I am really loving this. It's not like occ and it has a good plot.

I also like that my home fort was given a shout-out lol. (YAY Fort Sill!)

Please don't leave me hanging

The tension heightens! :O I hope you pick this back up one day and draw it to its conclusion. (And shamelessly, I out and out hope that Heather lives! :) )

Excellent fic so far; I like the way you've written it as a believable season 2 AU.

And the Jake/Heather ship sails! :)

But it looks like Heather's due for a spot of trouble :(

:O Explosive revelation is explosive! Heather's brave, but what that must have cost her... (O_O)

The TV show didn't dwell much on the "slave trade" angle, but the beds with the handcuffs at the trading post were enough to indicate that it was going on. It stands to reason that Constantino and his deputies decided to run some unsavory stuff on the side while preparing for war.

I like that Gail and Jake are both being realistic, but it seems that there's going to be hard feelings coming up, regardless of what happens (;_;)

I like the Heather/Jake 'ship forming here, as well as the home truths Emily and Gail are having to confront about what Emily wants (or thinks she wants).

I like your characterization of Heather and I really like the Jake/Heather interaction in this chapter :D

Huh! Interesting love triangle forming here.

I like the exploration of the problems Jake, Heather and Emily all need to resolve within themselves because he likes both women but can only settle down with one.

Nice fic! I particularly liked how you ended this chapter on a sort of cliffhanger/ultimatum. :)

"Just Hamilton will be fine. I don't think I want you callin' me Lieutenant Hamilton. Too formal. And only my mama calls me Jacob."

This reminds me of Castillo from Yesterday's Enterprise. :)

"Almost everyone calls me Castillo. My mother calls me Richard. [...] I think maybe I'd like it better if you called me Richard."

My word, I am enjoying this story. The amount of fanfiction for Jericho is mournfully small, and I was losing hope I'd find a great one. Then I found this! And oh, how sad I am that I've come to the last written chapter D:

Please would you consider poking your muses into writing more for this? You've built up the suspense wonderfully and I'd really love to see the climax 3

Plus, what with Jericho being shown on Netflix, I believe that the fandom will get a little more traffic (well I certainly hope so anyway).

I was a fan of Jake/Emily and I adore how you've written their relationship, how bad they are for each other, and how different Jake's relationship is with Heather. The characterisations are spot on, and if the show had continued, I think it would have gone down a similar route. _

This was most enjoyable to read, thank you.