You did a very, very good job of making this interesting. Right from the start, I felt anxious to know what was going on. Taking something as simple as McKay dialing Teyla's planet in the first episode and creating such a mysterious little background...I always wonder where people get ideas like these.

Never occurred to me what would have happened if McKay had chosen any one of the other addresses. Anyway, good job, and keep writing! I like your style.

I loved it!

That was pretty cool. The idea that Rodney sent a message back in time to himself to influence events in his future/present is an interesting idea.

Neat. I like how you explained how he found the address.

Oh, I like that! This was a good one! Awesome job! I love the way it all ties together perfectly!