ahhh, this was so sad, and i was listening to scientist by cold play. really sad, ya i wish people could make deidara more art crazy in fanfics, thats just the only thing fanfics lack, he's insane thats one reason i love him.

love it. it totally portrays the insanity. and yup, that insanity is what makes deidara so amazing.

That story was wonderful!

I agree, Deidara is so awesome because he's insane.

I'm glad someone wrote it in this kind of 'insane perspective', because I think it needs to be written about.

Great job.

I liked it, the insanity came across.

"filling me with more friction that..." should be than.