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Reviews for: Debt
Betty Bent
2009-04-17 . chapter 2
Wow!

This was great, it wasn't out of character, wasn't corny and was totally realistic. You have a really great sense of writing which allows you to get the facts across without sugar coating it or dragging it out, and for that you should be really proud of yourself!

Actually, I'm amazed that you've only got 14 reviews, you should have many more for this absolutely great story!
mitch365
2009-03-09 . chapter 2
I love it, i really really do. It was brilliant.
Nice Huntress
2008-09-25 . chapter 2
Cute ending! You'll have to write more about Ruby =]
bookworm2009
2008-08-28 . chapter 2
i loved it
maailma-rahu
2008-06-01 . chapter 1
This is a fantastic story. It was just so touching. I absolutely loved it. I hope you'll write more Lily/Scorpius fics.
BDSanta2001
2008-05-21 . chapter 2
M. Delicious like dark chocolate candy bars!
BDSanta2001
2008-05-21 . chapter 1
Excellent!
Queen Nightingale
2008-05-18 . chapter 2
oh my god.

that was absolutely fantastic! i literally cried over the 'he wept' part. so sad!
you're an awesome writer. keep up the spectacular work

- q.n.

p.s. however, im still angry that you're not writing serpent's tongue anymore. ARGH if i was near you i would bop you with a cookie.
Hydra27
2008-04-15 . chapter 2
Aww, I absolutely loved this story. It is beautifully written, and I adore the dynamic between Lily and the Malfoys; particularly Lily and Scorpius; of course. It was a lovely mixture of humor, angst, drama, and romance, and I loved every moment of it. Thank you for writing and for sharing it with us. :)
Hephzibah Valour
2008-03-13 . chapter 2
i really like this.
i like the thought that scorpius would want to help out people that his family has harmed
and i really love scorpius/lily (:
this was really good
(:
L.A.H.H.
2008-03-09 . chapter 2
Ah, happy ending! And they've started calling malfoy kids by decent names!
PotterCullenGirl
2008-03-04 . chapter 2
I absolutely love it!! Its so soo cute and sweer! My favourite was lily’s chapter. I ACTUALLY had tears in my etes. The final ending of chap2 wasn’t amazing but the rest of the FF was!
So emotional and sad!! *sniff!*
Brilliant work.
Hugs and cookies,
~LS
TinaMustDie
2008-03-03 . chapter 2
Beautiful story.I've got stars in my eyes.
Divinyl
2008-03-03 . chapter 2
I LOVED this story :) It's amazing :) :D :)
Brincelven
2008-03-02 . chapter 2
aww this is such a great story. I loved how you did it! It feels so real almost like a soldier finally coming home from a battle. I liked it a lot.
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