I liked it.

It's really well writting.

There's just one thing I'm not sure to have correctly understood. Why did Inoue said that Rukia was dead if she wasn't ? Did she believe so (and did a mistake) or did she do it on purpose for whatever the reason was (even if it would be "too evil" for her, wouldn't it ?)

Anyway, congratulations.

Cloudsdreams

PS : sorry for my mistakes due to my English '

Loved it! IchixRuki foreva!

That was a really cool story!

I am very glad that she is not dead! It wouold have been terrible if she was! The way that Ichigo reacted was cool!

Have a good day!

Well, your grammar needs some work, but other than that, it was pretty good.

I liked it. Very intense emotion. I love how it was rukia who saved Ichigo this time.

Til later readings

I LIKED IT.

hope kubo gets a page in your book and do something like this...the manga's recently all about slashing and inoue's "kurosaki-kun" chants that's causing me one major head ache.

That was intense! Marvelous story, you could really feel the emotions coming off of the characters. Amazing job!

That was really intense. A wonderful oneshot. Write more of them. I would appreciate it.