I liked this a lot. I think for me it wasn't so much the couple, but the way you worded things. Very descriptive, and I loved the way you described it.
Love the title as well; it is very...original and special. I won't forget this one. ^.^

Oh my.

I don't even know what to say, I totally fell in love with this! You have an amazing skill to write about something, that could really happen to us, living people. This story was so beautiful it made me smile, though that doesn't tell anything really, I smile a lot. I love smiling.

I think this story is kind of... hmm, how to phrase it right... i think it's kind of like a story, which you didn't have to write, but you did anyway because it has a meaning of somesort, you know? It's short, and it's better that way, there's nothing more than there has to be. I think that made me like the story more.

People, (and deffinitely you as well) should write more stories like this: short, beautiful and ones that have a meaning.

To put it shortly: I love this, thank you so much for writing it.

-Admille

This drabble is written so beautifully and the description just gives me quite a stunning visual in my mind. Imagining Sasuke with an orange umbrella in a sea of monochrome colors. I don't know why but it makes me smile and feel all warm and fuzzy :] Looking forward to reading your other works!

Aw, that's cute.

AW.

Okay, favorite of your stories so far. I love it!

Especially the last two paragraphs. They're amazing. :)

WAH. That was so beautiful! Why can't they be together? You write them so well!
Aw...it was SO CUTE and subtle! I love the way you write.

... ;_; AW I love this ^^

That was GORGEOUS! Beautifully written. Oh my god. This was so so beautiful it could have been a poem. I LOVED IT! AH! Ok, I’m babbling, I know. BUT OH MY GOD! It was so good!
Faving!

Woah. Short and simple yet undeniably one of the best. OwO

aw...that was a pretty nice mini-story thing

Aw.

It's poetic and cute! Wicked!

It's lovely. :)

You have a very poetic style, you know. I like it! ^_^
FAVE'D! :D

That is so pretty. I love the ending and especially the description of Naruto's eyes.

Now...I wonder why I forgot to review this before...?

What I liked was the simplicity of it. However, the idea that everyone would have black umbrellas except Naruto is good: but unlikely. It was nice to just sort of picture it...because you used some very good description.

I loved the way you used 'alleviated'; it was the perfect word to use. Must have been the highlight of my day; someone actually using words longer than 'hello'.

Beautiful; as always (a phrase I've come to use very much now...)

xx