Absolutely love it! Have you done on with Venus and Malachite(Kunzite) yet?

How about Jupiter and Nephrite?!

Please do them for me! I am requesting you to write these because I think you are an awesome writer!
The work here was just flawless!

I like this. It's really great content, however it came out a little too rushed when you wrote it. When you have something as poignant as a lover's return, it's always sweeter to relax and take your time with it. I promise you, if you convince the reader that they're there with Rei and Jadeite by more words and described feelings, it's a much more memorable experience for everyone. Otherwise, great job. I'll be looking for more of your stuff when it comes out.