LOL
I mean, I’m surprised you didn’t ** out some diamonds while you were at it,”
Seriously, best line hands down. And thats saying something because this whole story is made of pure WIN.

LoL - Mikey and Donnie 's comments were great. Good job!

Funny, I too thought April was exaggerating, especially on Karai, I'm like 'yeah okay sure'. I wondered where exactly you were going with this then I read Mikey's line and 'ahh that apporach'. I also thought the way you said 'he stuck to his guns' would mean Mikey would put his points diplomatically as he rarely but sometimes does, but no...

I hope April gets more action scenes in future, I've always liked capable female characters in stuff rather than damsels in distress.

I shouldn't have been eating my breakfast when I got to the line about the diamonds - now I can add the monitor to my 'things I should be cleaning right now' list, after that spit-take!

Excellent work, funny stuff and poking fun at the part of the film that was most jarring (we all know that Karai would slaughter April - but meh, let her have her moment!)

Bwahahahahahaha. . . priceless, Cyn, just priceless.

And, yes, beauty - or an accomplishment - IS sometimes only in the eye of the beholder. :0)

Poor Mike; he was right, of course, but - sometimes tis best to just let the red-head have her delusions (or illusions) of granduer. LOL

Nicely done. Loved it!

Be blessed,
Rene'

ROFL!! ** diamonds!? I don't think April was exaggerating with her retort for that one, well deserved a critique though it was. Yes Donnie, just be glad you don't have to deal with crazy women's **.

And thank you, I can finally smile during that bit of the movie. I know you've gotta suspend belief whilst watching a flick about walkin', talkin', fightin' turtles... but *c'mon*! Karai should have so whooped Aprils butt into a small stain of smoosh on the concrete.

I could read your fics until I'm old and gray...

*contemplates saving them in a text file...decides not to*

I (heart) your stories so much! Even the Mary Sue ones...LOL

Ha hah!
*Now* we have the story set straight on April's miraculous victory over Karai.
Whew! Thank you Mikey!
Nice way to frame the set up for the "reality check," too.
Sounds like April may have even embellished her enmity for Karai since by the end of the evening they were allies.
But I don't blame April for wanting her moment of glory, either.

Cute!

Diamonds - HA! Count me in as another who hated that part of the movie. I was all rolling my eyes and saying "She couldn't do that!" in the theater and the person with me was like, "Sh, nobody cares."

I loved Donnie's dry little commemt at the end, too. Not a good day for April being idolized, is it?

LOL! I'm loving Mike's line about diamonds. Funny stuff. I thought I was the only one who hated that part. I mean really...ok, April picked up some martial arts but I doubt it was enough to battle the Foot.

Wow. Just wow. I think I love you. I HATE that part of the movie, and this is just hilarious. Wonderful dialogue, madame, and excellent characterization. I loves it!

HAHAHAHAA! ya nut Cyn...jeez...I gotta agree with Mikey. hehehee

Lol, Mikey's being chased by April instead of Raphie..must be a nice change for him. 8) That was so Mary Sue-ish! Great job, I loved it!

I can see April going on like that in her head. And tearing Mikey to peices for critiquing her writing. Run Mikey! This is why you should have trained while Leo was gone!

Great story.
Catch him April! Catch him!

... Mike, I think you would have had a better chance of survival if you didnt add the 'diamons' bit! xD;; ouch! april is one ticked off mama, and Mike's in for a big knuckle sandwich~ Oh! And I Love Don's comment, too~ xD;;