i like how the song fits perfictly in with your writing. i also think sasuhina is cute.

That was amazing and beautiful. I wish you'd write more!

One word:AWESOME


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oh you should make it into a story,a rill fanfic .it was ok^_^

The possessive Sasuke is Hot!

I thought it was cute!

That was more poetic, then it was a story.

The words just seemed to flow out. The lyrics, I'm sorry to say, ruined it, but man it was so poetic. I liked it!

A bit creepy, but totally awesome. I think that Sasuke and Hinata make such an interesting couple.

it's sad but so sweet and sour. It was great.

you sure write amazing song fics. to be honest it seemed more like poetry than a song fic. this was great -grin-

Pretty cool~ A bit disturbing, but it's awesome, it would make for a good story

I thought it was beautiful! I think it would be nice if you wrote a sequel type thing. *puppy eyes* PWEEZ PWEEZ PWEEZ!

THAT WAS GREAT!

So sweet!!

I agree SasuHina is very cool! Nice one-shot! I love the style you wrote in it really fitted the song! Great story!