What an exciting chapter! And a great cliffhanger! Can't wait for the next one!

This is awsome. I command you to finish it! Just kidding, but seriously keep it up.

This is great stuff! I'll be looking forward to more.

Hey rogan its geoff. Good story only a few...minor things that i would change but otherwise its very interesting and much better written than the rest of your stories...Er no offense...lol WRITE MORE

This seems like an interesting plot, but also rather depressing. Poor Jesse... I wish more people could understand his pain, and not just shut him up.

This is good. Jess would deffinetly go insane. Well, maybe. Whatever, keep going. I wanna know what happens next.

OMG...FABULOUS! One of the best fics ever. CONTINUE!