It's so beautiful. I'm close to crying!

The story was good. But it's confusing, because it's listed as a Yusuke and Keiko pairing story, not just Yusuke. All that does is lead people on, I really suggest to change it to just Yusuke as the main character.

When the story was going along I thought that Rani was going to reveal she is Keiko and that she doens't want to be with Yusuke anymore, because of what he said about loving a stripper, more than Keiko.

It's a good story, but over all I suggest to change it from Yusuke and Keiko, to just Yusuke.

hey i like ur store but i would love one between keiko and yuske there my favorite pair


anyways bye

and great job

Amazing story.
I could just picture the look on Kuabara's face when he relizes Rani is a stripper lol
The whole thing is so cute, especially the end.

Awsome work, keep it up.

I love this story! I honestly thought nothing could make him stray from Keiko, but then he goes to a stip club and falls head-over-heels in love with Rani. I think you should make an actual story out of this. If you want any suggestions, feel free to PM me.

Awesome story! Keep up the great work!

Man this is so good, I wish there was more to this story, but loved it nonetheless lol keep up the good work

The name rani? won't comment!! Not into the stuff but went through it anyway!
Keep writing!