Haha! That made my day more than the other one! and if I haven't said this enough (has read a LOT of HichiIchi fics today) Shiro is so perverted! But the moment was sweet and gave me a warm fuzzy feeling inside but then Shiro disappeared and well...then it got funny! lol ^^

~Strawberry-Ringo

this one was cute too! A little fluffier, but very sweet and innocent. very nice :)

XDXDXD OMG This story also was hilarious!I really like it!I really like the way you write the personalities of Ichigo and Shirosaki. It's awesome!And very good done!*-* The situation was very funny!And I really like when they're confused by their strange relationship. It's very good written in m opinion. Also I was laughing a lot with the mobile thing. Sure Ichigo was having a bad time, but Shirosaki and me sure were having a very good time XDXD And the last part was very good, when Ichigo made his mind, Shirosaki disappears...Yeah, it sucks XD But when Ichigo said that of : I'll work on my technique, and Shiro answers him that of last he checked he was virgin XDXD Very funny!And the end, with Ichigo noticing who was the one that was calling him XDXD And why he couldn't have a normal alter ego like Batman XDXD I laughed a lot with this!
I love a lot this story also!And I hope you'll continue writing more about these two and continuing this kind of story, with Indissoluble and Good Vibrations:They're very interesting and I like a lot how you write the characters *-* By the way, I love the title of this fic XDXXD
See you!Continue writing your way!^-^

fantastic! i loved this as much as i did your first one!

excellent!
i found you on KivaEmber's community for ichiXhichi action, and i'm so in love with your series! i can't wait until the next season!
i really can't say i found too many errors. i mean, the occassional grammatical slip-up happened, but that's alright.
i think the hilarity of the situation distracted me too much to find mistakes. you did a great job! i loved it!!

Cute. I like ShiroIchi sometimes :)

Awesome story!!
SNUGGLE, dammit x]

i just notice something...Shiro still has Ichigos favorite glasses when he left

Ichigo: Hey, gime back my glasses
Shiro: Nah! They look better on me, see (sticks out his blue tongue) look they match.

the blue glasses does match his blue tongue ^_^

A good one, I must admit :D

Ha, ha...it was funny and sweet at the same time. Shiro's a devil...so evil with teasing Ichigo with the cell phone's vibe mode. Should have put it on the sound one Ichigo. Anyway, it's mostly funny at the end, 'cause he finds out that it was a payphone. Looks like Shiro should've stole Renji's phone...or Rukia's. Awesome fic!

wow. i liked it very much, but the ending was my fav cuz it was so funny. it rocked. i havent read teh other one, but im going to now!