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| AngelofNicky 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseVery well writen. Keep it up! |
| BenRG 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abuseLike you said, real life is not as in fairy tales. It is nice to see that Ulrich and Yumi have happiness together despite all the inevitable problems of life. I can imagine Ulrich being a very doting father and Yumi shaking her head in disbelief of some of the things that he lets the girls get away with. Why do I think that Ava has been spending too much time with her Uncle Odd? ;-) Blue hands indeed! This started slow but despite nothing /actually happening/ is still an interesting read. BenRG's Rating: 7/10 |
| Japanese-Fanatic 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuseAww that was so adorable!! I loved it! This is going right to my favorites!! Amazing job! Japanese~Fanatic |
| Amaherst 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuseShort but sweet. |
| PeaceToThePeople 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseaw! that was soo cute!! i loved it! hapily ever after! |
| Lune-Solei 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseAw! Ems, I really like this. It's terrific. And, yay! The countdown! Lol. |
| Alexandria J 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseAw, I liked it. And, I'm the first to review! ~Alex |