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| hinata4ever78 2008-04-05 ch 3, | abusereally interesting story! please continue. PLEASE! |
| Clockwork time 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseQuite the set up but the charcters lack discription of any kind so does the enviroment they are in. SO where are they who are they what nation do they fight for who are they fighting, i belive most of this stuff should have been included in a prologue. At any rate lets see where the story goes try to make chapter 2 a hair longer |