OK on the more serious side, nice job.
This is like a work of a true artist. For the blank spaces in my first comment,the description was amazing(I kept on slapping myself telling that it was just a dream)The other fanfic I read is usually about the same stuff with the blah,blah,blah(You know... wrong grammer, fight scenes). No, not you Fulcon, I like your stories if you're reading this. And for the one when he had the vision when he heard 'Funny, I’ve never called myself that…', that was Danny, deciding on his superhero name.(Phantom, wink, wink, nudge, nudge) To sum it all up, I LOVE THE WAY IT WAS WRITTEN!(still hyperventilating then faints)

(Hyperventilating)
O...MY...GOD...MY...heart...the words... the complications... Indescrbable...amazing...can't breathe... omygod ... omygod .. write more... omigod...IT WAS WEAVED INTO TOTAL PERFECTION! (faints)

I love it, The DETAIL! Oh my god, I wish there were more people like you on fanfiction! Or just people like you making more books! I would so buy them.

Well, it's not dead. I'll be danged.

The good: Down to the last detail, you really have description down. Grammer is good, paragraphing is JUST often enough to meet what I like. You're good. Also, Danny was just too much in this chapter.

The bad: ? (see comments).

The comments: The part where Danny is told to be 'reborn' was a BIT on the unusual side. Not bad, but not really good either. So it's stuck on the comments section. :P Adam, I think is going to have a field day with him. He has 'going to morph into super-serious dude-man' written all over him. :D Update soon!

If only he knew what was about to happen...heh...hehheh...muhaha...MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHA!

...Sorry, I was having an evil moment there.

Anyway, I liked all the detail (especially the 'Tasty/Nasty Burger' sub-plot that Butch Hartman wanted to use in the series, but didn't) and the little changes here and there.

And the scene where Danny is having all those 'deja vu' moments? Total win.

...Wait, X-men!? OMG even *awesomer* if this ends up a semi-crossover story, if only for a chapter or two!...Or...it could just be somebody saying something similar to that...

I'm going to try and figure out each one. Read below at your own risk.

- DIPSTICK! - Ember, obviously.

- Denounce your… - Vlad.

- Dear Ma… - "Ma" is probably "Maddie"...hm...

- I shall this little electronic… - Wait, huh? I don't understand this one. Must be a grammer problem, right?

- Demon Brothers are… - Honestly don't know...

- BEWARE! - Box Ghost

- Leave it to the professionals kid… - Nick Fury

- So much stronger… - Dunno'.

- We’re the X-Men… - Oh, I wonder who that could be. /sarcasm ...Unless this is taken out of context...

- The Amazing… - "The Amazing *Spider-Man*?"

- You’re a dork… - Jazz to Danny, probably

- Lord Ghoul… - Somebody talking to the Ghost King, Pariah Dark?

- You could get… - "You could get *hurt*"?

- Funny, I’ve never called myself that… - Not sure...

- All I have ever… - Really don't know.

- Drag you down! - Probably Vlad, but I might be wrong.

Also, did the blood test not find Danny's ghost blood or something? Or...since you're making changes...does he have different powers or something?

I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Yay! A DP fic! A future crossover fic! Hallelejah! YAY!

The good: You my friend, are a pretty dang good writer. Perfect description, perfect spelling, perfect paragraphing, all that junk. :D I like the portal sequence.

The bad: ?

Comments: Just update soon, dang you. This looks good! :D :D