Oh, beautiful...
I really hope you continue this!

Poor Jesse... Please update soon!

Aww, cuteness! I seemed to have missed the alert for Chapter Two, but I read them both now and it was very good :-)

You have such a flow about your writing. I seem always to have too many words on a page, but you got it just right.

Mil :-)

I love it!! poor jesse, sigh! update soon!

I like your story. There are a few grammar errors here and there that need fine-tuning, but the actual writing is explicit when necessary and makes for an enjoyable read. You've made my favourite list and I'll be checking up on your story so I hope you continue to post more. Keep writing.;-D

So GOOD. I love Mediator fanfics that deviate from the normal circumstances of the Mediator World. Having loved your other story, Remember Me, I am looking forward to what you have to offer with this one. So far, it's impeccable and I can't wait till you update.

Stupid, selfish, egotisic... *rants on for a few more minutes* Please update soon!

wow it was really good i normally dont like stuff like this but i like d it al ot. update!

Oh, a great first chapter! Update soon, I'm intriuged...

Mil :-)

i really dont have much time right now but i always love reading your stories ill write more when i get the chance i promise!

Wow, wicked fic so far! Please update soon!