wow it's just so romantic and so sweet!

OH.MY.GOD!
That is the cutest thing i have ever read in my intire life!
HOLY CRAP!!
THAT WAS AWESOME!! :D

This is an ah-mazing story!

Very good. you are talented!

Such a cute story!! I loved the ways Edward chose to show Bella his reasons. I was actually shocked when I read in your note at the beginning of this chapter that you are/were only 13!!

Very cute fic! (:

isnt the real book Thirteen Reasons Why about a girl who commits suicide? if so ive read it lol.

this isnt a negative review i just wanted to let you know theres a book called thirteen reasons why... its about a girl who comitted suicide its a great book but u might consider changing the title... lmao

that was fantastic ! and you expect me to use a comment like good job! even though you are only 14 i expect that when you do experiance these events yourself your writing will be even more amazing ! you are truly a diamond in the rough awaitig to be found ! and i hope you do !

you are brilliant why did no one else think of edwards lullaby ! genius!

lovingb this story !

oh my god that was so romantic

that was really sweet number one!

really good start !love it allready

This is a very good story!! I cracked up at Alice talking about wearing platforms at her wedding, and again at Emmet saying Edward would have to push Bella in a wheelchair down the isle!! LOL. Wish I could read more, but I must go to sleep!! :(

Hahaha

i lvoe that last part :D