Wow! What a chapter! Please more!

I'm liking it so far :D. Though I'm curious as to what happened with smokescreen's body (unless I missed reading that part. HMM, I'll double check). I'm also wondering how everything is going to work out. How will Jen react to this? Will she even find out? etc etc. Update as soon as you can, I'm lookin' forward to it. :)

This is one of my favorite Transformers story! =D
I can't wait to read the next chapter.

I certainly hope you update this story soon. It has been a WONDERFUL read and I find myself wondering whats going to happen. even when I'm at work!

I love the descriptions and the character interactions and I can see a little of myself in Clair. She's an excellent, well rounded character, and I sincerely hope she helps Smokescreen to mesh out what happened and contact the others. i cant wait until they all reunite!

PJ

Hey, I don't know if you know but it's Non biological Extraterrestrial. Entity is jsut another word for God or god-like. I like your story!

Yeah! You're back! I'm so happy right now! ^_^ I happy to hear that the move went smoothly. I'll be making one myself once I get an apartment lined up.

LOL, for a moment there I thought Claire might have been let off the hook with Smokescreen not remembering Simon's memories...but then you delivered on her fears and I had a nice little laugh at her expense! This is going to be awkward, especially since Screen already tried to kiss her!

Surely they will find a way to get in contact with Optimus and the other Autobots (before the Trans-Organic in Smokescreen's body does). Poor guy, he's not going to like it very well being human-esque, and I don't think Claire will go easy on him for long. And what is this mark she has? Is it a birthmark, tattoo, or something else?

Ok I think I mentioned earlier that I'm anal about medical details, and a few little things are bothering me. The machine that Claire was hooked up to in the beginning of the chap is called vital sign monitor. ECG (aka EKG) are only hooked up temporarily for a few minutes to monitor the the rhythm of the heart. Telemetry is what a person is hooked up on while in their rooms to constantly monitor the heart. The feedback from the telemetry is fed into a monitor that a nurse (or someone trained watch heart rhythms) can watch at all times. When one little electrode is disconnected, the monitor either shows asystole (a flat line) or a "check leads" sign. Any nurse worth his/her salt would have gone in and checked on Claire the moment something like that came up. Sorry, it was just bugging me.

Also, just for future reference, a patient has the right to refuse care and leave the hospital at any time. It's called leaving AMA (against medical advice). All they have to do is sign a little piece of paper saying that they understand the risks involved with leaving and (knowing this) choose to leave anyway.

Anyways, I really enjoyed reading this chap. I am absolutely looking forward to more interaction between Claire and Smokescreen. Update when you can! Faithfully, soaringphoenix86

Yeah! Happy to hear the move was successful!
Very good chapter! Can't wait to read more!

lol poor girl she has had a lot to deal with

Oh God. D: That's got to be SO AWKWARD!

I would be mortified x_x; But at least Smokescreen's a lot nicer to Claire than the ass whose body he has was... If that made sense.

:3 Good job on a great series!

I ... wow.

This, along with "Juxtaposition," is one of the best Transformers fanfics I've read. Excellent characterization, interesting concepts (Transorganics are scary), great OCs ... I cannot ask for more.

Well, except for a happy ending for poor unlucky Claire. Her past ten years wereawful. You have to make it up to her, after everything you put her through! At least have the Boyds be friendly to her again ...

Excellent first chapter! I'm sending this review through your post at the LFE forum.

Although I do not know much about transformers, this fanfiction allows me to discover more about it:).

The only concrit I can give at this time is to watch how your sentences flow. Some sentences seem a little rough at some spots, but I'm sure a rereading sentences out loud while you are editing can fix that:)

Like reviewers before me have said your own character is not following down the Mary-Sue path, and I'm very impressed with that.

Excellent work so far, and I can't wait to read/review future chapters:)

OMG! What the frag happened?! One minute Smokescreen's a giant alien Autobot fighting 2 Decepticons, and the next he's inhabiting the body of a Trans-Organic wearing Claire's ex-husband! Was it some kind of transfer thing through the live wire?

Oh dear Primus. Poor Smoke. He is now a solid visage of flesh. He's at least 10 feet shorter, and he has no idea how to handle the human-like body. How is he going to pull this off? And better yet, will they be able to find a way to return him to his real body? Wait a minute! If Smokescreen is in the Trans-Organic's body, then is the Trans-Organic in Smokescreen's body? Uh oh...Poor Claire. Too much info at once. LOL! And what will the other Autobots think about all this?

This chap is absolutely amazing! I LOVE it! I can't wait to see how Claire and Smoke interact with one another once Claire regains consciousness. Fantastic chap! Have fun moving, and I'll see ya when you return! Faithfully, soaringphoenix86

wow whats going on
why is Smokey is Simons body

Another lovely chapter. You've managed to make Claire into a believable, well-characterized OC. Congratulations! She's not a Mary Sue, she's interesting, and her reactions are typically human; however, you managed to introduce her to the world of paradigm shifts in this chapter. Well done and her reasoning that maybe she does need to widen her understanding of the world around her was not a sudden occurence. Rather, you've built it gradually to a point where the reasoning coalesced in her mind.

Great work! Thanks for sharing...and happy moving. :D

late april?

*wibbles*
no!
aww hell. well, good luck.