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Gabberz720
2009-08-27 . chapter 1
Ok, a few things...I hate the Jonas Brothers >_> xD And...incest is honestly disgusting. But this was so sweet and cute, and you are SUCH a good writer, I have no choice but to adore this fanfic xDD
hayley7961
2009-08-12 . chapter 1
Don't worry about haters. This is a fave of mine

SO hot. ;)
canyouhearmeoutthere
2009-07-18 . chapter 1
nice story but I think that maybe nick should just chill out because he acts like me on a really bad day... and that's telling you somthing if a younger sibling is telling a elder sibling to get thier act together...plus my favorite jonas bro is nick so ...it works!
Jazzumz
2009-06-28 . chapter 1
amazing! I'm trying to write a jonas story, Most people don't like it because i'm trying to please EVERYONE by putting boy/girl (even though i don't like it) and boy/boy. The people who wasnt bo/boy are like "UGH WHATS TAKING SO LONG?!" and the boy/girl people are like "I love it! Ugh, I hope the boy/boy never comes!"

Its hard, Any tips?

( I go to camp today until the 3rd btw.)
AvrilLavingeFan
2009-03-28 . chapter 1
JONASCEST!

Love it! SO much! MWA
Bixarre
2008-12-11 . chapter 1
""You both talking again?" Nick smiled."
Darkkaiser379
2008-10-12 . chapter 1
This was brilliantly written! There were a few spelling mistakes like 'what me to stop' and others but I won't list them all
Finally uke Kevin! Joe may be younger but he would so be on top
Great story please do more!
AmandaPanda5274
2008-09-22 . chapter 1
This one-shot was amazing.
I love it.
xG01NG2GR33C3x
2008-08-02 . chapter 1
OMG THAT WAS AWESOME!
You should make it into a story though
hahah i just thought of something weird it would be like a gayporn story HAHAH not realy but that would be cool to see what nick would say after "You could say that."
iPone
2008-08-02 . chapter 1
i loved it!
so good!
badforever671
2008-07-21 . chapter 1
awesome story do another one
or even another chapter
PKBitchGirl1
2008-07-20 . chapter 1
What's wrong with you?

Incest is illegal in the US and is taboo for a reason

You have absolutely no respect for the Jonas brothers if you write this disgusting trash
ohalexyouxrock
2008-07-07 . chapter 1
ahaha, the ending was hilarious!
i love this.
amazing amazing amazing.
JuliaHearts
2008-06-12 . chapter 1
AMAZING writing!
loved itt
leigha.belle
2008-06-08 . chapter 1
Okay, that was disturbing at some points. But I love it!! It was awesome!

Nick cracks me up!
"You both talking again?” Nick smiled.
"You could say that."
HAHAHA!
Anyways, great job!
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