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| caramelapples 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseThat was very good! I liked it! Good job! |
| Huddyalways-24-BK-MA 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuseLove it my friend!! GO MAK!! I love how BK stories seem to have bits of comedy with the whole 24 being TV. 24 hours must be a coincidence haha. ^_^ Well gotta go to bed! Night. ^_^ ~Huddyalways♥ |
| Palmer4President 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuseYAY! I'm so glad you wrote something else and posted it! This was so brilliant, Mak, as always with you. Such a great story, just a few minor spelling mistakes, but not really anything that matters. I loved the switching between their two points of view. Oh, and the whole placing their left hand over their heart thing was absolutely adorable! Just... aw. Awesome, awesome story! So glad you posted it, and I really hope you write some more soon! |