Interesting.

And it enlighten my day too, I can see the parallel with Illumination. Your Raito's characterizarion is somewhat endearing..or is it just me? XD

Ganbatte!

This is so sad ;_; It just makes me want too smack them both on the head and then make each others feelings known to the other...
It's a great piece of writing, you've captured both L and Raito's POV’s extremely well

It was beautiful... Awesome... I think I might love you for this. *sobs*

Yes, you deserve every review you receive.

Everything you write is so goddammed beautiful. It hurts sometimes to know that I'll never be that brilliant; no matter how hard I try. You're wonderful...

And I especially like the way you write in Light's (Raito's) point of view.

Something is always there in your fictions, I don't know how to explain it...but it's a feeling I get when I read them. I don't know...like I said; but I'm too happy to care.

;D Thank you for making my month with your wonderfulness.

this is really good, you got better at the first person POV, or maybe Light is easier to write? whatever the case i like this one far more than L's (even though L totally Pwns Light).
I really like your work, and look forward to the update of Of Physics And Chemistry and Captivation.

*sniff* that's so pul-sang-ae! i'm sorry, i'm bilingual and this is the only way i can describe how i feel. i guess a literal translation would be...woeful? or maybe depressed? no, the 1st one's better.
anyway, it's the last sentence that got me...why are you so good at making me so pulsangae, HUH? everyone writes about their "forbidden love" thing but only a select few have been able to squeeze my heart with their writing, you of course being one of them. & this is just a one-shot...a freaking good one, but...i'll stop ranting now. ㅠ.ㅠ;

Yes. You deserve reviews.

Okay first I got to say: You are the best Death Note Yaoi/Shonen-ai/ Lx Light writer out there. Not that there aren't other good ones, but to me your the best. ^_^

Now that being said I got to say I loved this story. I read L's point of view, and it was so sweet, and sad, and so him-that I loved it. (But for some reason didn't comment).

This story is well-written, and you have a great insight to Light's -your baby's-personality. I espcially was touched by this line:

One of the reasons I want to catch Kira so much is so that he won’t get to kill you.

I liked it. It seemed like something he would say in his cute, uke, innocent Raito that I was touched. He's so well expressed and his character is done well even if he is feeling love towards L. Not like: "I loved him the first day we met, and want to marry him."

...Though that would be good too since I'm like a yaoi pervert. Hehehe.

Anything to improve? Apart from mistakes which isn't important tottally because the story felt the same either way to me, would be...nothing. This one-shot was done beautifully~~

Now if they could confess they're feelings and have hot kinky sex...Off to read more of your stories~~

^_^

Aw.
This is so sad.
I hate it when that happens in stories.
I always want to shout "JUST KISS HIM!" or something.
Great job as always.

I really liked the way that you captured Light's character when he couldn't remember being Kira. I especially liked the way that you handled his emotions but more importantly the way he dealt with them. Good Job!

~laughs out loud from the opening paragraphs~ Of course Raito
just doesn't think immediately that L is possibly MADLY falling in
love for him. Nope. It's "DAMMIT! I IS NOT KIRA!"

Ah, but of course Raito's is longer. I mean... he's quite the
little thinker...

Parallel unrequinted love is beautiful, in a sense. When reading,
you find yourself wanting to scream, wanting to stop something
so that they can find happiness, which is such a precious gift.
But you read and read and read and hope, but it ends.

So we're left with something on our mind, Why? Why? /Why?/ and
knowing that such an ending as "happily ever after" was reserved
for our ignorant innocence. For logical, we praise.

But really... I'm starting to lose myself o.0

Nice job. I enjoyed it. I give a review to you.

Yay!

It's very good, and a good pair for 'Illumination'. Yeah, sad, isn't it?

Aw, that's so precious. I really love this POV of his. How frustrated he is, and how much he cares for L. It's lovely. :)

-raises hand high in the air eagerly- I want to review! :D Well, I like this Light. It's more Light-sounding on the outside than my whole entire story, even if it's interesting. But sometimes I think about the differences in wavelengths between Light and L... and then it occurs to me how different they really are o_O How this applies to your story, I'm not so sure anymore... sorry... (I think I'm still jumbled up from all the reading I've done today.)

Sorry for the lack of a competent response. =_=

Aw! "How close and yet so far," would be the perfect quote for the two stories. Well done.