| Reviews for Free Will and Fate |
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Jonuts 5/8/13 . chapter 32Ah, can always count on Harry to be both retarded AND a hypocrite. So whiny and angsty because he's kept in the dark and fed shit, so instead of doing the right and sensible thing of informing Neville about relevant facts he REALLY needs to know, he keeps him in the dark and feeds him shit. |
Jonuts 5/8/13 . chapter 24I don't get it. Why is Harry going to die? His mere existence is a paradox. Whatever happens to the other Harry is irrelevant. |
Jonuts 5/7/13 . chapter 18I hate to say it, but whatever good things happen to Harry are wasted on the ungrateful little shit... |
Jonuts 5/7/13 . chapter 15For the record, the alternate ending was better :p |
Jonuts 5/7/13 . chapter 12So...if Harry is dying of the same unknown curse that killed his father, under what logic is the chance of the killer being the same person "Staggeringly small"? Not exactly a common cause of death... |
Romantic 8/14/12 . chapter 2 Um… Good twist! |
HideSeekKeep 7/11/12 . chapter 13I just came upon this story and haven't been able to leave my laptop. Your premise is fascinating and your writing is gorgeous. The last paragraph in this chapter (Chapter 13) particularly moved me. Now to continue reading... |
LucidRush 7/10/12 . chapter 46A work of art, one of the best stories I've read on this site. I'm off to read the sequel. |
Covante 4/14/12 . chapter 46A great story, I'll be reading the sequel soon. Thank you for posting. |
akasanta 3/21/12 . chapter 16I'm not big on reviewing individual chapters when starting a story with lots of them usually. Just wanted to tell you that I'm really enjoying this one. I've lost track of the number of Harry Potter fanfiction stories I've read. This one is, to me, the most original one involving time travel I've read. Thank you for writing it. :D |
Witherwings01 3/2/12 . chapter 45Well that's gonna annoy me if I don't get your reviews to an even number. 400! |
Witherwings01 3/2/12 . chapter 46Wow! I tore through those final few chapters - gripping stuff. I'm so pleased I came to party late - now I don't have to wait for the sequel to get some answers about the consequences Dumbledore spoke of (though I think I can guess) or the fate of the other Harry - I'm sad for him. Overall, a great read. Thanks. |
Witherwings01 3/2/12 . chapter 44Yep, I think that's about the only way you could have Harry instigate plan B without turning him into a heartless murderer. Nicely done. |
Witherwings01 3/2/12 . chapter 43TONKS! |
Witherwings01 3/2/12 . chapter 42Edge. Of. Seat. Will he follow through with plan B? Next chapter here I come. |