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| Sun-chan1 2008-06-16 ch 1,  | abuseWow. You really got me with the earthwuake. It was good before thay, but that just blew me away. And I love the way Dawn checks up on Xander and the way Willow looked them in Giles' house. I loved Giles line "I would never die without consulting you first." Thank you. |
| Watcher.mine 2008-06-04 ch 1, | abuse"In another room, Buffy is 95 percent sure that her fight with Giles has just triggered the end of the world. " No wonder the First showed up in season 7! No, seriously, this was a great fic. The characterization was dead on. It was a relief to hear them in my head, to still have our characters even in a post-show setting. Dawn in particular was magnificent, and the scenes between Buffy and Giles were touching and wonderfully voiced. Well done. It's going in the C2. |
| Oceanee 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseI really loved this. Very well written, very touching... I shed a tear at the end!^^ Kudos for a very well done job! |
| Marion the Geek 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was astonishingly beautiful. Great work. I am totally trying not to cry. |
| mythichistorian 2008-03-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseHee! Stubborn Buffy and just as stubborn Giles - it probably would take an earthquake to get them to come to their senses ... And everybody else losing patience with the situation - I can see that happening, too. Willow is being Willow, of course and making her point with actions rather than trying to discuss it, but she probably needed to here ... she didn't start the earthquake did she? *g* Good work, and thank you. :-) |
| GiovanniBlasini 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely done. Dialogue was very believable, and the story just seemed to *flow* well. Interesting twist on the "locked in a room and forced to make up" concept, too. |
| Antenna 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuse“I’m fine,” he assures her. “I would never die without consulting you first.” This line, for some reason, just does it for me. And I think it might take an earthquake to get the Buffy and Giles of the comicsverse to talk to each other. Gah. Dummies. |