i like this story,..

Wait, did you intentionally named the ramen shop KARIN'S??!! These stories with KyuubiXNarutoXSakura are the best, like exploding art! (YAY!)

Aw that was one of the cutest! Please make some more like this! Except longer i can't wait to read if you do..

~Lilly~

Nice work there...but I'm still not used to lemons/hentai for that...It shocked me! ^_^ (damn, I'm still too innocent for this things but I saved enough courage to read the unedited ones...^_^'). All I can say is wonderful! I like Naruto!

DUN DUN DUN DUN! lol! That was a pretty big hit! lol!

so if this story represents you and your girl your saying you got horny, raped her, she liked it so you two got married and had twins, right?

This was a very cute story (at the end anyways, I can't ascribe the same adjective to the sex scenes after all!), I really enjoyed the way you had Sakura take Naruto out of town to tell him he was going to be a daddy, too!

I have a difficult time believing that rape can be the foundation of a healthy relationship. The story is written well enough, but it's a bit too disturbing for my tastes.

Round of applause, man. Good job.

I LOVED IT ! it was a fresh new view on the demon part of naruto!!

so cute twins ! >w< nice fic keep on writing more narusaku !

The begining scene was pretty funny. I like the Kyuubi's first line probably more then anything else in this chapter. I like that the Kyuubi pops in whenever, makes Naruto's life more intesting. XD

teenage pregnancy... haha
nice continuation of ur lemon

Yeah, I really like your Story!

Greatings from your reader

FamousFox89

This was so cute! it was cute how they had twins! I loved it! So good!