Wow! That was good. You write Edward and Bella really well. Thanks.

omg really awkward with charlie coming and id be really unhappy if he broke my car lol

LOVE it! great job! :);):)

Well done ;)

omg! HOT!

Aw cute! I like it so far.

WOW! that was the BEST smut ever! this story is fantastic and really hot! you are an amazing writer! _

Oh My God! That was awesome. I love that they were able to do it right under Charlie's nose. Like he could really do anything about it anyway. I do feel bad about the truck though. He is going to need to give it some tender loving care. Maybe he can find a way to con Rosalie into helping him. Maybe he can say something to the effect that she just wont because she knows she can't do anything for it anyway. That should get the venom boiling within her. LOL

I enjoyed your telling very much. You have captured the voice of Edward and Bella nicely. I have just started New Moon, and liked the references to the stereo. I look forward to reading more of your "grown-up" writing of this enjoyable couple.

I LOVE IT SO CUTE -

love itt!

That was very well written. Well done

OMG!

i loved it

swet!