Wow. Just...wow. I admit, this is not what I was expecting when I read the summary and clicked on this link, but I was very impressed. Lovely description, and very...interesting subject matter. (Not a bad thing whatsoever. Not enough people write fics like this.)

"Working through the night, Jeff...umm...never mind."
(I know this fic isn't meant to be funny. I didn't find it so, just couldn't resist saying that. >_>)