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Reviews For: Oath Breaker II: Dawn and Twilight - Reviews: Page 1 of 5

TutelaTwin
2008-09-04
ch 3,
abuseawesome story. i like it very much. DAMN THOSE DEATH EATERS! on the other hand, i like just about everything else, and i know you can't have a good story without a plot, so bad guys are necesary. though i wish you would put more of the very fun lemon in teh story. lol.
volleypickle16
2008-08-31
ch 3,
abuseHey I love this story!!
Pen-Name-Kitsune-chan
2008-08-27
ch 3,
abusemeanie, leaving that cliffie...

plz update soon!
Mitethe
2008-08-19
ch 3,
abuseWonderful. This best relationship between Harry and the Malfoys that I've ever read. Especially between Harry and Draco. I love it.

And you've spelled Knockturn Alley wrong.
thedarkersister3
2008-08-07
ch 3, anon.
abuseHi! I just wanted to say, I love your writting style! I makes me happy beyond compare, and I love how the storylines always twist. Thank you so much for writting.

P.S.: Update soon!
Victoria Humblydum
2008-08-06
ch 3,
abuseIntreaguing story. I love this version of Draco (and Harry, of course). The character development in both Oath Breaker stories is excilent.
Please update soon.
~Victoria H.
GenX-Revolution
2008-07-30
ch 3,
abuseAwesome. The books never really focused on the Malfoy or Snape..only in the perpspective of Harry. I like this fic...and hope you update soon.
GenX-Revolution
2008-07-30
ch 2,
abuseIt's soo political. I like it. All the scheming and stuff makes it have depth.
GenX-Revolution
2008-07-29
ch 1,
abuseI noticed that Draco is a bit more docile then the first story and well, most of the characters evolved. Draco - well is Draco. Well, they're still newlyweds (understandable.)
iluvchocs
2008-07-27
ch 3, anon.
abuseThat's a really interesting idea with the brewing of a child, and it explains a lot about Severus' closeness to the Malfoys. Does that mean that how Voldemort was brought back was a kind of perversion of that process? Lovely, evil!cliffy ending - I can almost imagine the way Harry and Draco standing, poised for battle.
smiles
2008-07-22
ch 3, anon.
abuseno, not stealing, inspiration. plagiarism is only if you Xerox a whole book. an obvious copy requires no skill at all.
smiles
2008-07-22
ch 3, anon.
abusejust wanted to say thank you. i'm really glad you're writing this sequel. it's taken a life of its own. a magnificent creation
iris
2008-07-21
ch 3, anon.
abusei don't know how i missed that you started a sequel.
but i'm still so happy!
ah, wonderful! usually sequels suck, but this one seems just as intriguing as the first!
equatorialguinea
2008-07-15
ch 3,
abuseLove, love, love your story! I can't wait to read more of it.
MidNite Phoenix
2008-07-11
ch 3,
abusegreat story
love it
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