 Doni 2009-12-11 . chapter 7I love what you've done so far. Nice work. |
 Dopeydd 2009-12-08 . chapter 7 Still reading and still enjoying. Like your stories, like the depth of charcter and history. |
 AlyenBlack2 2009-11-28 . chapter 1This is still one of my absolute favorite stories so I hope you continue soon. I love how you put the Malfoys in a better light yet kept the fact that they did some unforgivable things. I like the Harry is willing the listen and understand rather than being rash and judgmental as he is in other stories. Continue soon! |
 TheLadyPendragon 2009-10-30 . chapter 7This story is wonderful! I really love your take on things -- dark wizards, half-breeds, etc. This entire history you've written for the Malfoys is amazing. I also love how Draco doesn't change completely from one day to the next, just because he cares for Harry. You've givven everyone so many flaws that make them realistic and you keep in character, working that into the story. It's also amazingly written. You have me on edge about a lot of things. I mean, I can't wait for the next chapter -- What will Draco think about Harry's family? If anything, it might reinforce his hate of muggles. Will Hermione become addicted to glamours? Will everyone work out their respective issues against one another? I'm on the edge of my seat. Please do continue soon, okay?
P.S. You made me kind of like Rita Skeeter! You're amazing, I swear. ^^ |
 Sean Mulligan 2009-10-19 . chapter 3Draco's denunciations of muggles are very annoying. |
 Dracogriph 2009-10-11 . chapter 7I just got done reading all seven chapters of this story. I cannot wait to see how Draco reacts to watching the Dursley's. I like how Draco is also giving the lectures on the history and practice of Dark Magic.
I have noticed though that a lot of the spells that Harry is casting are more and more dark spells. I actually enjoy this and can see Harry renouncing the light. Keep up the good work! |
 Sasoka H. 2009-10-09 . chapter 7Oh! Such a cliff hanger D: Argh, I've been wanting to see what happens when Draco finally finds out about the Dursley's and then cliff hanger. Aw, well, anyway, just wanted to say I quite like this story, especial the way you describe all the dark magic and things that go along with it. So, keep up the good work. |
 Laura 2009-09-29 . chapter 7 I've read the whole Oath-Breaker and now this sequel up to Chapter 7 in the last few days. Looking forward to future chapters very much, with a little bit of trepidation that it might not be finished! WIP's can be torture sometimes! But anyway, my favorite part of this chapter was the awesome article by Rita. So very satisfying and realistic to read her viewpoint! I felt so proud of Draco! The flight to the pizza parlour was pretty cool, too. The details! Like all the specific little potions ingredients and Snape going raiding to the Longbottom estate... Your concepts are incredible, love it all. |
 yue no rei 2009-09-23 . chapter 7>< I think Draco probably really needs so see this to understand.. I am half dreading had eagerly waiting for the Dursleys appearance in the next chapter. |
 maara 2009-09-19 . chapter 7 I enjoyed reading Draco’s conversation with his father. You shoved us once again what good father Lucius is and how much he cares about his family. Draco is lucky that his father is more liberal than his grandfather was.
I believe Weasley family would be only happy if Harry would dump Draco and would start despise all Dark wizards and Draco. So I cheer for Draco who is proud and doesn’t wish to consider opinion to get friendly notes with that family.
Is not big surprise that Draco is so close with his family, they would fight for each other if necessary. And when we see that dominant part of Wizarding world is Light wizards who hate Dark magic it is easy to understand why for Dark wizards family is so important.
Harry who never had family before the Malfoys, I think feels like outsider. He says that he doesn’t fit there but I think he also believes that Narcissa, Lucius and Severus will never recognise him as a part of the family.
Harry taking Draco to meet awful Dursleys that should be interesting maybe Draco would assume that Harry has been violent (had hit him and raped Draco’s mind) because of his upbringing with abusive relatives.
Thank you for this wonderful chapter.
Please continue writing! |
 Itallia 2009-09-16 . chapter 7Oh, I'm very curious how this is going to play out. Will Harry be the all or nothing type, and reveal everything now that he's started? Or is he still trying to cover things up by showing Draco that he had a "decent home" and such? |
 Lovedward48 2009-09-14 . chapter 7 Yay!! you updated!! This chapter was so awesome!! I love how the Malfoys are always scheming!! It was also very interesting reading Draco analyzing Harry and comparing him to a house elf. It fits kinda. At first I thought he was just tidy (you know, as another contrast to Draco) but now it really makes sense and even gives his character more depth. I'm so fascinated by your character development, really!! I CAN'T wait see Draco reacting to the Dursleys! Are they actually confronting them? Will Draco kill them? Oh, I hope so!! (chuckle evilly) But if they don't kill the Dursleys they're at least putting them back to their rightful positions as scum!! They should fear Draco and Harry! (muahahaha-cough)
BTW have a nice little thieving trip, Severus!! It's good for you! (grin)
I agree with Draco that Harry is just too bold to ever even begin to be subtle. I don't mind though as long as he doesn’t rub off on Draco! It was good to see Draco still has his ways to get what he want (potions, charms, etc) but it was even better that Harry finally opened up to him. They're growing to really trust each other. I believe I've said enough now!! I still love your story! You're still an amazing writer! The world still goes 'round!! All is well! I'm looking forward to your next chapter!! :,D
I noticed a tiny mistake when Harry and Draco were cuddling in the cellar: Henry kissed the top of his head... (It should be Harry ;) |
 CeilingFan 2009-09-13 . chapter 7Oh EXCITING.
I love how imperfect couple!D/H remains - how Draco is still pretty traumatized by the thought of an angry Harry and Harry can't quite manage to trust Draco no matter how much he loves him... |
 lola 2009-09-13 . chapter 7 finally, finally. I don't know how often I tried to read this chapter. I even got half way, but then my browser automatically refreshed. Ash..
I love the chapter by the way. :) |
 CeilingFan 2009-09-12 . chapter 6Signing in to say that I can't read the 7th chapter, if it is there... |