I liked the story. I hope you can finish it soon.

Amazing!

in Liebe, Red Tail

I enjoyed chapter six the best! The accident was wonderfully put together, holding just the right amount of suspence. I'm looking forward to seeing your next chapter? Is helping going to arrive before something more can go wrong for poor Ryo?

Oh Man come on snap out of it! RYO! (tears in my eyes) Ryo come on

wow this is so good keep up the great work

Oh Man Ryo clam down! Come on you love her and she loves you just hang on. Kayrua is playing a very deadly game. hope she gets what coming to her! Hope a happy ending.

Keep it coming! Hope it gets better.

oh getting more interesting! Me likes very very much. *looks at authors name* Are you new? I don't recall seeing that name before. Well I'm loving your story, wishing the chapters were a bit longer, think your title is great, and hope to see another chapter posted soon. *Grins* Also, you've a few spelling mistakes, wrong words, missing words, that sort of thing. Might want to skim back through your chapters again.

Oh...happy mood gone now. I feel so sad, like I wanna cry. I'm not a fan of MiaxRyo normally but that was just damn near heartbraking and nothing really happened. *Looks exasperated* Let's see...I loved the dream, the tenderness, the fear! I love it all! *devious grin* Ryo's gonna suffer! Oh, that last line, genious!

I find myself highly amused tonight by the littlest of things. I read your story on a whim and I'll tell you, it never crossed my mind that the person speaking was HER! lol. I think you've hit it dead on, Ryo's so adorable when in pain. Maybe that's why he's my fav! Lovely opening, beautifully worded! I'm off to read the next chapter, ja!

Oh Man no not that. Who's playing with his mind is it Kayrua? please let them be together! boy your toy with is mind Poor ryo!! ah!

oh my it seems interesting. hope Ryo and Mia don't break up! Kayrua oh joy i'll read it!