Reviews for Deapool's Suffering

Reviews For: Deapool's Suffering

Captain Deadpool 2008-03-28 ch 3,	abuseI don't beleive that Deadpool will get off that easy. Anyway, good humor, but I'd reccomend using some adjectives to describe Deadpool's tone of voice. Excited, bored, things like that. Good work and keep it up! Captain out.
renegade-demoness 2008-03-21 ch 2,	abuseCool. You gave Deadpool a whole new meaning to be. Update soon.
The Oracle Dragon 2008-03-16 ch 2,	abuseawesome
Captain Deadpool 2008-03-13 ch 2,	abuseHow refreshing! A good Deadpool story that's not written by me or the Uncanny-R-Man. A little rough around the edges, but I honestly enjoyed it, and that's what matters in the end, isn't it? Still, you could use a few commas. Just some small things to give your writing a little more polish. I'll give you an example: "Yeah whatever bitch." Deadpool said cutting the line. "Yeah, whatever bitch," Deadpool said while cutting the line. I can beta if you want. I've been dying to try that new DocX thing. It sounds pretty cool. Anyway, your jokes are fabulous, and the fight scene was good.
The Evil Sound Ninja 2008-03-13 ch 2,	abuseWhen life gives you lemons, make grape juice. Then sit back and let the world wonder how you did it." -Unknown You killed him, you pink haired BASTARD!
Lin16 2008-03-09 ch 1,	abusenice start. I'd like to see where it ends up going
The Evil Sound Ninja 2008-03-05 ch 1,	abuseHA HA HA! In short this is going to be one hell of a road trip, and I hope we all can come along with you.
Captain Deadpool 2008-03-03 ch 1,	abuseMy hands are shaking with excitement as I write this, so forgive any mistakes, please. This is great! Deadpool is fun to write for, isn't he? Bit of a challenge too, right? I love your fight scenes! Your grammar was a little off (only a smidge), but not enough to ruin the experience, and the most important thing is that you've gotten Deadpool's personality right!

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