|Reviews for Roux's Return|
| Amber Hart 5/31/08 . chapter 1
I'm sorry if I come off as mean from this review but...
YOU NEED TO CHECK IT OVER BEFORE YOU SUBMIT IT. a LOT OF THINGS THAT ARE OOC AND ALSO SOME SPEELIN AND GRAMMAR ERRORS.
yet again, sorryif I sounded mean, just had to get that off my chest.
| Ditte3 3/13/08 . chapter 1