Reviews for Operation Untouchable

PsiSquirrel
2008-04-01
ch 1,

abuseThe writing was good
however i think Anaya blended in with the crew pretty quick, unnaturaly even. i also think the "shifting" was very odd because no explaination was offered whatsoever. I think if you added a how and why that could be a very intresting plot device. Also i got lost as to where the characters were during the story. Hell, lets add a nitpicky detail shall we? Guns are not reloaded in mass effect but i dont blame seeing as you dont own the game.
overall i think it was a good story, but obviously nothing is ever perfect
i enjoyed the read :)

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