Girl, you better fix this story! I want a continuation with lots of Babe loving. I know you can do it, don't leave me hanging here :)

Tattered Dreams? Girl, I'm gonna TATTER YOUR A$$ if I don't get a Chapter 2 alert real effing soon!

You can't think you are going to leave it like this! I *WILL* find you! ;-)

Great work!
Still love ya,
Mag

you should do another chapter on this! or a sequel. It's really good but I kind of dn't get the point of this story...is she with joe but is in love with ranger? or did she decide not to marry joe bcoz ranger came back?

I love the 'real' emotions you wrote into this piece. Lovely job.
--Adora

What are you talking about Romance/ Humor, that was sad! But really good. Are you going to keep it going?

THIS HAD BETTER NOT BE A 1-SHOT! Do you HEAR ME? Holy crap babe. Yeah, useless as a piece of lint. I'm not buying it! AH! Ok, get to crackin'!

XOXOXO

A.

i like it so far, i think that ranger needs to say something though

LOVE THIS! Please write more soon :)

Lisa, your back, and still trying to get Ranger together with the woman of his heart.

Second hand, huh. Just like her feelings for the Italian hothead.

I'm glad to see your still writing. I love to read your offerings. Thank you so much.

Aww..and here I thought I'd never get a Lisababe alert again. Thanks for making my day Babe! This was a real treat and I'm hoping like hell you'll continue ;)

No! You can't leave it there! Say it ain't so! That was way too good to leave it at that crucial moment. I mean, they are MEANT to have sex in the changing room. I just know it!

This was amazing! I'm just going to assume it ended up with a real HEA and that she ditched Joe and went back to Ranger. If I do that, this story leaves me with a huge smile on my face and a happy happy heart. You are such an amazing writer Babe! The tension between the two of them was breathtaking!
-Josie

Great imagery this story conjures up, I can see them all there in the bridal shop. Good one!

FAB!

so is this going to be continued?