RESPECTFUL IN THE SEXUAL AREAS - VERY TASTEFULLY HANDLED - NOTICED THAT YOU HAVE NOT UPDATED THIS STORY IN QUITE A WHILE AND AM LOOKING FORWARD TO YOU TO PLEASE TAKE THE TIME TO DO SO. IT ALWAYS MAKES THE STORYLINE MORE ENJOYABLE TO BE ABLE TO READ BOTH BELLA'S AND EDWARD'S POV.

VERY ENJOYABLE AND WILL BE CHECKING BACK FOR UPDATES - PLEASE DON'T FAIL

Great story. Really enjoyed Edward's POV. Thank you.

Wow - nicely done. :)

Although I thought it was a bit mean of Edward to admit that he didn't enjoy their first time as much as he had to keep himself distracted! Liked Bella's payback. ;D

OMG - this is so much more powerful listening to EPOV. :D

The charms for the braclet are still amazing!

Love both of these stories. However, I really enjoy reading EPOV. It is the same thing with Twilight and Midnight Sun - EPOV seems more real and edgy. ;)

e! brilliant!

I think that was enough with the sex parts. Isn't there anything else you do on honeymoons?

bella! that was evile and funny for her to just walk away and go to the bathroom.

Estavan? You did that on purpose! lol when Emmet said 'Whoa! Bella got a chest!' and some other funny stuff like when they painted his car.

aw how sweet happy ending s but wait its not over... yet.
'Weddings the only place where you could have PDA without getting a detention slip'
lol I came up with that myself whiler eading this chapter though I keep changing the last part.

thats funny and sad Edward made Jasper lust after Bella because of his feelings! lol that was funy poor jasper though.

that was beautiful !!

great chapter. Thank you. It always bugged me how Charlie hated Edward so much and then suddenly when the wedding was approaching,he was fine with him--SM never explained any of it. Your version of it was great!

please continue this! it is so refreshing to read this story from edward's pov! absolutely love it! ;)

hey,
are you going to finish this story,
i truly like it from edward's perspectice