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XxxxxMrs.CoreyFeldmanxxxxX
2008-07-16
ch 1,
abuseAwh how shweet! You captured the characters real well! Great job!
kissme_anddie
2008-06-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseAw... I can so relate to Soda in this, I use to lead my little sister in a room and then hide from her and laugh while she started crying out for me (I was evil back then) but I love my little sister. The story was sweet and so real. Great job!
AvatarKatara38
2008-06-13
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful job! You captured the emotions perfectly!
triggerhappy.antagonist
2008-06-05
ch 1,
abuseI've helped raise three younger brothers, and I don't think I could do better than this. You've captured the actions and milestones of an infant perfectly! And you portrayed Soda and Darry in a very realistic way.


I hope to see more from you. :)
with love - fred
2008-05-27
ch 1,
abuseThat was so adorable. You captured the emotion really well and I love how Pony wasn't all phased by Soda's random blurt. It was cute. Great job!
SexyStar101
2008-05-04
ch 1,
abuseOh gawsh...
It's like when I read the story I can feel it too
gawsh I just love how you wrote with feeling and detailed

I can actually picture that happening with Soda and Pony
Marla'sRagingTemper
2008-03-27
ch 1,
abuseLike the other readers said, very very very (VERY) well done. You perfectly captured the essence of love, jealous, and caring that come along with being an older sibling, especially being Sodapop. Excellent job.
Supergymnast Hiya!
2008-03-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was so sweet and cute! I love it cause it gives you a view of Soda when he was a kid.:)
Laughing
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abuseI loved every second of this. I've been searching through stories, trying to find something to cheer me up, and I think this just may have done the trick, so thanks. It's a great fic, and it reminded me a little of my early memories with my little sister. ;]
Anonymous
2008-03-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseAaw ... that was so sweet! Great job! :D
cooroo
2008-03-05
ch 1,
abuseOh wow. That was just... wow. So... wow.
Uh, in case you couldn't tell, you have rendered me speechless with the pure awesomeness of this oneshot. I loved it. I've just always assumed that Pony and Soda always had that great relationship, but you've put a much more realistic view on it. I loved the little mention of Steve not liking Pony either, because it follows through to the book.
I've always loved Soda and Pony's relationship (it was honestly one of my favourite things about The Outsiders), and I think you've captured it perfectly. Very well done. I love it.

Ps. Now you have to go write more about the Soda/Pony relationship, ok? ;-)
katelovespony20
2008-03-04
ch 1,
abuseAwe.
This is by far the best written, and my favourite Soda and Pony fanfic.
I loved how you compared pony's hands like starfish hands. It's so true and such a good detail.
Everything in this is perfect, I love it. =]
SisterCat144
2008-03-04
ch 1,
abusethis was really good!
you did a great job on it!
=D
Caspar Rainbow
2008-03-04
ch 1,
abuseThis is really good. I enjoyed it a lot :)

There are so many fics out there about Pony and Soda's relationship, but it usually involves one of them getting hurt, or them always being close. I like how Sodapop hated him at first. It makes more sense, since a lot of older siblings are jealous of there younger ones. Really good job.
ponyboylover2
2008-03-03
ch 1,
abusei love the part about takeing pony back for a sister.
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