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THIS WAS THE BEST! THE TENSION! THE DRAMA! WOW! IT PULLED ME LIKE RIGHT IN! CARRY ON THE GOOD WORK MATE!

for futurre reference its 'watched' helplessly ah well it sbtter than 6 a clock, those were the days, i love your chapter titles btw! you really show the protagonists charcter well!

seems a familiar idea, french lesson? nicely put though!i like the 'creeping smile'x

its really funny how you keep saying 'Baka', very kyo from fruits basket! drool! x you never told me you could write like this and i help you with english?

Wow, this rocks, the imagery, the language and the beginning is fantastic! Can't wait to finish reading something this brilliant! happy?x