  Anon 3/20/12 . chapter 65 I, along with others I am sure, wish that this story would be completed. It is by far the best story featuring Gohan out there. This story is written with such skill it is more like art, as with all of your other stories. Every word just adds more beauty and detail, I can see why you would want to major in English, you are so skilled at writing. I know it probably won't happen, but it would be absolutly wonderful to see a conclusion to this story. I hope you have good luck in college! |
| PinkMongoose 2/7/12 . chapter 65 Wow, this story was incredibly well written. It's a shame that you ended it without the last chapter though. It really grabbed at my heart during these last few chapters, especially Goku/ChiChi's death, it nearly had me at tears! This is definatly by far the best story here! It really is sad that there is no ending to this magnificant story! |
 I Laugh at ur Pain 6/28/06 . chapter 1i'm bafled...was the death of gohan a vision or reall life? |
| Coca-Cola Classic0 6/22/06 . chapter 65 UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE! |
| BlackTigerG2 10/9/05 . chapter 65 You must update! Congrats and good luck in college, this story is so good. I personally just wished there was more Goten/Gohan chapters during the journey. Oh well, great job. Luv ya! -BlackTigerG2 ::Gives Son Grin:: |
| VB 10/6/05 . chapter 65 Finish it! Finish it NOW! |
| dfd 9/1/05 . chapter 65 update |
| chibi crazy 7/11/05 . chapter 19 *plays 'charge!' melody* CHARGE! *plays 'western chase music'* Great chappie capita'n |
| BballAnimeLover89 6/9/05 . chapter 65 DAMN WOMAN! YOU BEST GET UP AND UPDATE DAMNIT! THIS STORY IS TOO GOOD TO BE LEFT HANGIN LIKE THIS! *sniff*
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
| SirNotAppearingInThisFilm 3/31/05 . chapter 65 He's going to do the same thing he did with the dragon, isn't he? What's an Ooshii Kurai? YAY FOR CHIBI GOKU! But Gohan has a valid point. Goku is a lot stronger, so you would think that Goku would be the generic choice. Still, who's complaining? AWESOME STORY! THIS IS SO FREAKIN SAD! (Sob) YOU KILLED MY BABY GOKU! (Cough) I mean Helga's baby Goku... YOU MUST UPDATE! I'm only in 7th grade, but I have a piece of advice I learned from my brother going to college; GO TO CLASS! That's what everyone told my brother when he went. That's all I can say about that. BUT GOKU DIED! (sob...Again) PORQUE? UPDATE NOW OR FACE MY WRATH!
Namarie, Mellon nin!
Snaitf Skywalker |
| kate 3/27/05 . chapter 65 i got lost, what is going on? |
| kate 3/27/05 . chapter 38 i would say the review button would be blue |
| lpgohanfanatic 3/26/05 . chapter 65 Very good. I decided to give this story a try and really loved it! Please update soon! This story rocks! |
| mystic warrior 3/26/05 . chapter 65 I forgot all about this story, definately one of the best. JMU and VT do you live in Virginia, I'm from VA my self. |
| otepoti 3/25/05 . chapter 65 oh nifty well theres a cliffhanger - great chapter |
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