I usually don't like songfics, but as I adore Once, I had to read this one. And its perfect.

Aww...

That was beautiful! You got so much emotion into it, and it was written so well!

Great, great work with the characterisation and the fic in general! Loved it =]

Loved the story, the depth you went into in such short statements was thrilling. Perfect angsty story. Love it :D well done x x x

I think you should be proud - I don't usually go for the songfics but this is so well written, the way you've phrased it it's actually easier to read than a traditional fic and less cluttered for it; your writing has a real flow to it that made this a pleasure to read, I love how it took me to a common destination, (by which I mean Jack and Ianto), through a fresh route.

And happy birthday to your brother!