I really like this pairing. I had just recently started looking into the stunticons personalities, when I read the Breakdown was a lambo with paranoia issues I went on the hunt for Red Alert/Breakdown. This is the first I've found of it. Thanks for writing such a wonderful example of it.

Oh and as for the lack of dialogue- I really didn't mind and it wasn't really needed to get the point across.

Whoa... I haven't ever read a Transformers story like this... and the surprising thing to me is it's actually GOOD.

Those two together make some kind of twisted sense if you look at thr right angle. Probably. No hope for that relationship to go anywhere, but it made a good story.

Well, this is a new one for me. :3 I've seen Red Alert with Inferno before, but never a /Decepticon/... Definitely a fun idea. You did a great job with portraying their mutual paranoia, and effectively getting them past it.

Oh, and the sex wasn't bad, either. lol ^_~

So sweet! What a weird pairing. The two skitzos fall for eachother. hehehe.. but it works!

"Ignore the lack of dialogue in this fic. I just thought the speech of two paranoid psychopaths might take away from the secks."

That cracked me up. Sorry... but it did.

Anyway, an interesting pairing to say the least. I happen to like Red Alert, and he doesn't get enough love. Primus bless his paranoid little spark.

Zari

*giggle*
GOOD TF smut.
XD
I believe I have acquired a taste for the not-so-straight fondling of sentient mechanisms.
It's almost...
(what's the word)
Relaxing, some how.
Makes the mechanical beings seem all that more human.

pure awesomeness. I actually think the lack of dialogue added to the believability :)

on another note, I just can't get over the awesomeness of this paring.

well done : )

That was amazingly well-written and engaging. Wonderful!

Holy crap this was AWESOME!
totally blew me out of the water.
Are you going to continue or is it just a oneshot?
I vote continue. I can see so much potential here.
Red alerts and Breakdown's freakin out over getting caught, the general paranoia they'd have around each other.
Ah man you gotta continue, way to good of an idea to leave it as a oneshot.
Here's hoping for an update.

There was no need for speech, like you said; Red Alert's thought process was enough to make it unnoticable.I wouldn't say it was a crack pairing because of the way you presented it. Anyway point is, loved it.

good. very good. I don't think there was any dialogue needed. these words painted the picture very well.

NONONONONONONONONO! *bangs head against wall*

I DO NOT need another crack pairing to love! I don't! I DON'T! Even if it is very awesome and in-character (kind of) and...and...

I'm not doing a very good job convincing myself...

This was very well done. I currently hate you, though, for making me notice yet ANOTHER awesome crack pairing. *sighs and flops on back in defeat*

I just can't win when it comes to Transformers...