I think you should write a sequel.

-Again.-
How come I haven't seen this!
This was purely Rhode! This would be her torture I ♥ it!:D
Allen should just really give in, but that's what u gotta love about this couple one must always be stronger then the other!:)

~ Book Thief101

Liked it nice i give it two thumbs up.

Great story,Rikku-chan! Are you a AllenxRoad fan as well?

at the end, was it like torture time was repeating 4 allen? Awesome fic, reminds me of this horror movie

whoo. you gonna continue this?

I like it a lot. I thought the characterization of Road was a little off at times. Like when she saw his Crown Clown, "You honor me," doesn't seem to fit. Maybe something less formal or more child like. "Ooh, how pretty!" or something. She's exceedingly childish, even in her sadism. Otherwise, it was excellent, as Remus said, the repeating idea was good. It gives me chills to think how many times he went through it.

MANA!

poor Allen.. Road's going to make him relive that over and over until he agrees, isnt she?...

Nice~~ ^^

Hello dear! Wow! already 4 reviews! You're getting so fanfiction!popular...I'm jealous...

Like I said before, I really like this!! The whole "tail biting snake" technique of going back to the beginning at the end is cool. I can't really critique too much because I'm not very familiar with the characters, but your grammar and whatnot is fine. You've gotten so much better at writing, it delights me to no end!

See you soon!!
love,
Remus

whoa this is rly rly rly good! i've gotta read the manga now-thanx for the fic, it was awesome and WOW!! lol sry for taking so long though hehe xD great job, ur an amazing writer!! =D

WOW...that was wow...awesome. What else can I say? I love it and I'm a picky reader. So that means it deserves to get the title for beging uubersmexy...my first favorite story too!

...O.o

O.O! wow, rikku-chan! this was... wow. i really liked this, i just wish i knew the characters more. see, i only have a limited amount of knowledge of D.Gray-Man, so i don't really know that much. but i guess that means i have to go and read it then! ^^

i loved the creepiness!! especially at the end. "Allen-kun... Allen-kun, play with me." that was just great. like WOW!
great job! i really like your writing! it's wonderful!

keep up the great work! this was a great (and creepy) one-shot!!
-naomi