you all know what's funny? the description of colby right? well i look exactly like that! and like the new guy (colby) i also have a short memory. haha. oh and when is the next chapter going to be up?

you forgot to mention the indefinite hiatus

good story. getting faved. this is the episode that should've been but never was. 20/10

I've always favored the thought of people becoming pokemon, and this was a great story about it. Nice humor- please finish it!

Your writing style is good...for the most part. It is starting to get a bit repetitive though. Perhaps it's time you hit the climax. Just a suggestion, though.

I like the premise. It is also very realistic. Grammar is good, but sometimes the battles get a bit dull. I can't wait to continue.

dude lovin the story keep it up!
hope the next one is up soon =)

Good work as always!

Sincerely,
AshK

Gure-chan: ... Kyya! *glomps* ^^ I loved your story! The battles were realistic, put into greater detail than I have ever read. Gotta love your character in the story too. =3 Can't wait for Chapter 5. ^^

Gure-chan. PEACE!

YAY!! *is very excited*

Thanks again, for bringing this story to . It's much easier (in my opinion) to read this story here, because you don't have to be distracted by Deviant Art's ads, or the comments at the bottom, lol. XD


As for the story, like I've said in my other reviews - everyone is perfectly in character, and it's as if I'm watching an episode of the show. In other words, I'm LOVING this fic! Keep up the good work, Colby! I'm really excited to find out what happens next!! ^__^

And of course, I'm adding this to my favorite stories, since it's one of my top favorite Ashachu fics. LOL. XD

I like this so far. I hope you'll update it soon. I have a few pokemon fics myself, but unfortunally I'm kind of a slow updater. lol I hope Ash learns an electric attack soon. That would be really funny, espically if he shocked himself. I'm gonna add this fic to my favs. ^__^

Please help Pikachu dominate fanfiction by copying and placing this as your siginature. ^__^

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(o'.'o)// Pika Pika!
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Good work as always!

Sincerely,
AshK

Great story
Keep update it. I can't wait to see what happen next.

Nice story! I like what's happening. Update soon!

Nice start!

Sincerely,
AshK